Matt Bellamy

Pretty good. Blank pages are evil :twisted: and should be wiped out. I'm not sure about how you repeated the word say- The cold blank pages stare at me. Mock ...

I wasn't convinced by the line breaks in the first stanza, and, being the lazy reader that I am, it dragged on a little too long for my liking. The ...

I found it quite empty. I saw someone on one poem say that it could have been written by anybody, and I think this applies here. You need to develop ...

Jah, I loved it. Especially "...(which would fit far less perfectly than hers upon the piano) Because if I had, I could let the world hear the sounds of my ...

Well, I was quite amused. Although "ssorry, before i was so RUDELY interruupted!" doesn't make sense, and I wasn't sure why jay said 7 a little bit after that. I ...

A couple of mistakes-"I fall in love to fast" should be "I fall in love too fast" and loose should be lose. I liked "I grasp at soft flesh and ...

I'm not much of a political person, I must admit I don't take half as much interest in the news as I probably should, but I caught the gist of ...

You have such a knack for description, it really is beautiful. But, and I hate to say it, be careful you don't overdo it. If people are too lazy to ...

A lot of description, which you do very well. Maybe not so great for lazy readers, but it doesn't matter, your stories wouldn't be the same without it. You take ...

I liked the layout of the first stanza, you represented gravity visually, not just with words. Also, I liked the last stanza because it seemed to suggest that you're not ...

Not sure if I liked the poem itself, as in the subject, but I liked the way you wrote it as if it was the end of a thought you're ...

Right, I'ma go through the poem systematically for once. Here goes. I didn't like the repetition of "without no friends" (which should anyway, gramatically, be "without ANY friends", I didn't ...

I loved it. I didn't like the capitalised line though, perhaps you could only capitalise some of it, or use italics instead. Loved "It makes a tear drop from my ...

aching for a Man who doesn't ache back *** i know exactly how good it would be to simply drift Away and Never Return Loved the first quote, it really ...

I hate that I constantly notice you, But when I’m around, you’re blind. I can relate completely. I think a lot of people can. Also, "Knowing that ‘we’ may never ...